Well I'll try again to get my excerpts to post to your nice site. I don't know what I am doing wrong but nothing seems to be comming up. After over an hour of trying to post to your nice site I'll try once more. If it don't work this time I'll have to go across town and get my son to come help me. I'm trying hard to get this done, I don't know what is the problem. This is very frustrating, This is such a nice site and I really want to be here. Steve Nelson

What kind of problems are you having, Steve? You just need to copy and paste into the site to post your excerpt. Let me know what's wrong.

Please note that Jude did edit this excerpt to remove explicit language and sexual situations. Some remain so read with caution! (~~~ were placed in areas removed) Please visit Author's site to read unedited version.

Excerpts from the novel TOMORROW’S WORLD by Steve Nelson
TOMORROW’S WORLD is an erotic Science Fiction novel by Steve Nelson. A man from the 20th Century awakens from a high tech hibernation experiment centuries in the future. In this future world nudity is the norm and sex is the passion.
…”HELLO” he said. “My name is Vin147, I am the Administrator here…The nearest we can figure is that you’ve been in your Dream Machine for about 200 years”. I was stunned! “ We are very sorry to say that all who knew you are now dead and gone. But look on it this way” said Vin. “You’ve been given a new chance. Our way of life is very nice and you’ll see it soon.”
* * * * * *
I was aware of others that were there helping me along on the wheeled hospital bed. I also saw that they were all naked and bald, with a small gold chain and badge around their necks. They had wrist devices and some type of rubber slippers on their feet and that was it!
I took special notice that some were women; and they all had big beautiful tits! “I’m in Heaven” I thought.
* * * * * *
The rise in health and strength that my co*k has received is astounding, not to mention the beautiful nurses that have helped me with toiletry and showering. I’ve wanted to just reach out and have a big taste of their lovely big tits for days now.
* * * * * *
Vin paused and smiled, “I have a treat for you, then.” He stepped to the door and came back in a moment with an extremely lovely woman in tow. “Arthur, I want you to meet, ‘Female401E’. She will be your assigned companion to help you through your transition to our, or your, new way of life… Understand now, she is not your slave or your servant. Female401E is a qualified nurse.”
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“From now on you are officially known as ‘Male501E’” said Vin. “Male501E, I believe you’ll be happy to know that Female401E is your downstairs neighbor.”
* * * * * *
“I AM VERY PLEASED to meet you” I said. “Please don’t be too formal” she said. “I am Female401E. I am here to help you with everything you may need. I’ll be by your side always unless you tell me to go away.”
“Are you kidding?” I said. “I don’t think I’d tell you to go away if I live to be 100.”
“Your new apartment is our first destination for today” she said. “Do you feel up to it?”
“Lead on Honey, I’m sticking with you!” “Please, my name is Female401E!” she said. “Ok sorry, but the number part sounds to me so official and unfriendly, how about, ‘My Female?” I said. “Just Female’” she said. “As I am not yours.” “Ok. Deal. Female it is then” I said.
“Male501E, you must understand that it is my job to help you learn and adjust to our ways, to make them your ways.” “OK. And I have an adjustment for you, then” I said with a smile. “When we’re together, you just call me ‘Male’, OK?” She thought a moment then said, “OK. We have a deal, ‘Male’.”
I sat back on the hospital bed and gazed at her. She wanted to speak again but I shushed her. “Do you know how beautiful you are?” I said. “You remind me of a female I saw in a publication back in the 20th Century. Your eyes are simply delicious. I feel I will melt when I look at you… I just love that bronze skin tone you have… You are slim with nicely rounded hips and your a** is just gorgeous!”
* * * * * *
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“Now Male, are you through enjoying my body?” she asked. “Never!” I said.
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Female 401E spoke again in her sweet voice. “First I want to help you with what you’ll see when we exit the Medical Center. You will see females mounted on males as they go about their business. It is customary for females to mount a male for trips here and there. Females do not do a lot of walking in our society they simply mount a male if one is handy.”
“As you’ve seen I am sure, the males here are incredibly strong in the legs and arms and of course you may also notice how large and strong the male’s cocks are.”
* * * * * *
“Ok, you’ll also see couples from time to time along the way and on the commuter trams making love. Do not stare. You see, in our society, beauty and love and making love are life-long desires we all have. Love and making love is what our society is all about. It is what we’ve been genetically engineered to do. We celebrate healthy living and sex. It is our way.”
“No worries Female. I understand and agree fully.”
“Now I want to get to know you better, Male, before your co*k grows as large as the other males. I am intrigued by your small 6” size.” With that statement she began to give me a fabulously wonderful blow job.
* * * * * *
True to her word, as we left my room at the Medical Center hand in hand, I saw females here and there being carried about while mounted upon muscular males. I also saw couples here and there making love on couches and other soft pedestals which were placed along the way, as Female told me, just for that purpose. I also felt warm air circulated about me, in this beautiful domed city of love, so that walking about naked felt quite normal and comfortable.
* * * * * *
INDOOR HALLWAYS of the building are carpeted and outdoor ones are not. There is a nice pastel color décor for each level. As I walked along the hallway of level 2 of the building, a female came out of her apartment and was surprised to see me walking alone.
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Hi, I am Male501E” I said. “I just moved in.” “Oh yes, I’ve heard of you. I am Female289E. You’re the male who has come to us from the past.”
“Yes that’s me” I said. “I’ve been here only a short time and I’m just finding my way around.”
“Well, come right in. You can pleasure me while I wash a few dishes” she said. So in I came and did as I was told.
* * * * * *
As I came in the door she took hold of my erect co*k and led me over to the kitchen area. We embraced, then kissed for a few minutes,
~~~
Some time and not a few moans later, she announced she was done with the dishes. Female289 took hold of my co*k again and led me out on to her outdoor balcony where she had one of those nice sex couches waiting. She said, “Now lie down I’m going to ride that little co*k of yours.” I lay down as told and she mounted me and began to ride me, slowly at first. She bent over to kiss me as she rode. I sucked at her nice tits. This is Super!
I held her bald head and we kissed deeply. She sat up and shrieked and moaned as she rode faster… She rode me for maybe 15 to 20 minutes, I can only guess, making those wonderful female sounds that I like to hear. Then my Wrist Com chimed and Female401was on the line. “Yes Female, I am here in 289. Female289 is just enjoying me” I said.
“Oh, I’ll come right away and help.” Soon Female401 arrived and Female289 said to her, “Come and ride this male’s little co*k. It’s really fun!
~~~
She was through and climbed off, she lay down on the side of the couch panting with exhaustion and moaning with pleasure. Female401 was just about to orgasm as well, she leaned forward and I took one of her magnificent Tits and I sucked hungrily. She shook with excitement and slowed her motion to a stop.
Female401 said to me a few minutes later as we lay there in an embrace, “Now, don’t you go and finish on me just yet, Male. You have a job to do down at the Medical Center.”
“Ok, whatever you wish, Female” I said, sitting up. She wrapped her legs around me. “Are you sure you can do this?” she asked.
“I believe I can Female” I said. Now, with strength I’d never before known, I rose up with her mounted on me. I walked out of the apartment as Female289 was saying, “Goodbye. Come again won’t you?” “Yes Female,” I said. “I always do what I am told.”
* * * * * *
I walked proudly with Female401E nicely mounted upon me like the other males did with their females. This was a wonderful moment for me, taking my place in this beautiful society as one of them. I walked with Female mounted on me all the way to the waiting tram on the street and took my place as a male with mounted female should. I relaxed a bit as we sat on the seat of the tram and she rode me slowly.
“Now, what’s my job to do at the Medical Center?” I asked. Female told me that I must make a donation at the Sperm Bank. …”That sounds just super” I said, as I tasted her lovely tits.
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*** If you want a hard copy Spiral Bound edition of TOMORROW’S WORLD #1, (about 125 pages and over 41,000 words and a whole lot of symbols!) send me a nice e-mail and I’ll give you all the details at: stevelogicstupiddoes@yahoo.com ALOHA

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Thanks Jude, I got my boy over here to help me. He speaks Computerese. I only know the kings English. And I'm pretty poor at that. Thanks Again, I hope it looks good. Steve Nelson ALOHA

Is the rest of this book available? Do you need to provide that website? I also wanted to repeat what I added to your post, that I edited your excerpt. Graphic material is only allowed in the NC-17 forum, which you don't have access to. You'll need to make 5 posts before upgrade to that level. Then you can post as explicit as you want, as long as you post a warning at the beginning.

I have to say that I would not want to live in the future you describe. LOL...no way would I "mount" a man to avoid walking around. Wouldn't that make the women fat and lazy?

Howdy, The only web site that I know of are my little cheap one at: http://tomorrowsworldscifi1.com
And my own e-mail at: stevelogicstupiddoes@yahoo.com Also on the contact page at my first and only web site there are several addresses for sites where I am supposed to be featured. At my little site there is a paypal button that people can use oR they can just e-mail me direct.
* I'd really like to find a publisher that doen't require thousands of dollars up front to publish my book. Any ideas I am eager to learn. Thanks for the nice editing job without wrecking the story. I don't know what a np3-17 site is. I'm always learning. Thank You, Steve Nelson

My only suggestion on getting published is to try one of the many online erotic publishers. They don't cost any money to the author, which is nice. I was successful with Cobblestone, but there are many others. Take a look at the following list, which details quite a bit of them: http://www.erecsite.com/PLIST.html

Oh, and the NC-17 forum I mentioned is a board on this site where I allow explicit sexual stories to be posted. You keep posting, and you'll have access to it soon.

Also, one other suggestion is you might want to make your book available online. You will get more sales if you lower your price and let people buy the ebook.

Hey Steve, I'm sorry to say but I wasn't a fan of your story. I just don't believe that females would act that way, and if that is the culture, what changed? why do they behave that way, was there some pivotel aspect in history which led to this society being created?

There wasn't much of a story line just continuous sex scenes. I know erotica novels are meant to have a lot of them but where was the character development? the "hook" to catch the reader?

It was a very interesting start and i liked the different world that he woke into but why was he in the dream machine? was it a mistake he was in there for 200 yrs?

Keep working on it, i think it's a great start. Please don't be discouraged by my comments i am merely trying to provide you with some constructive critism to help your story evolve.

Hey thanks for your constructive critisism. It's always helpful. I think that with the limited space I had to pick just a few of the juciest passages of my book, which is over 41,000 words and 125 pages, you haven't got the whole picture. Thus you are judging me too harshly. There was a problem with the hybernation unit that our sleeper was testing. He was a scientist working on these sleeper units for NASA. Testing was only to be for two weeks. Along with a new compound that would eliminate violent dreams. Basically you have to read the whole story, but most of humanity was wiped out by some kind of plague just like the ones that Our Wonderful Government is REALLY wanting to introduce. ie see a Big book by John P Holdren, Mr Obama's science advisor. I froget the title but he advocates Murdering by any means possible 80% of humanity. THAT IS TRUE! Weather you like Obama or not is not the point. There are Truely Evil people advising him right now. Don't froget what Mr Henry Kissinger say's of us Ordinary people, He calls us "USLESS EATERS", according to him, and this mr Holdren, and Bill Gates, and Ted turner, and On and on and on... (They are called EUGENICISTS')... They want 80% of us DEAD. Their fathers and early families were responsible for FINANCING a housepainter by the name of Hitler. And now they are trying again.
What ever you do, DO NOT TAKE THEIR VACCINES. They 'R' DEADLY! See the facts at: drtenpenny.com
Hey I don't mean to go on and on about this but there's a lot more to my story than you've read. Such as; There's a reason they are all bald, They are all nude, They live in a domed climate controlled city, They like Sex so much,... (Here's a sneak tid bit of info, A great scientist by the name of Dr Lee and a special team he established, did a kind of Noahs Ark thing as they saw through these MAD MEN of today and their Eugenics Ideas, Dr Lee is responsible for geneticly engineering these people, he is responsible for the comeback that the human race is making in the story since those eugenicists' destroyed the world of today), and lastly the sleeper 'Arthur/Male501E' turnes out to have special qualities that these beautiful people need.
Really, I've had several people read the whole book as a test even with typos and they have told me Steve it is a Wonderful story. Since I am not rich and I am just getting started my book is handprinted and spiral bound by me. I wish I had gobbs of money to get somebody to publish my book in a paperback form just like at the grocery store, but that will have to wait. Right now it is in Large print being a full 8 1/2x11 in size. They cost to produce. If anybody sends me a check for
$21.95 I'll fire one out right away. If you or anybody knows of a publisher that will print up my book without the upfront costs running into the thousands of dollars, also leaving me with total creative control, I'd be happy to talk to them. I am always investigating this avenue.
Besides, I kinda thought the large space age looking print would be welcome to many of us baby boomers right about now. Well I do what I can. And Thanks again for your thoughts, I appreciate all comments. Giosh I'm Tired aint You. Sorry. Steve Nelson stevelogicstupiddoes@yahoo.com or http://www.tomorrowsworldscifi1.com.

I didn't feel my comments were too harsh, if there was much more to the story why didn't you post the first chapter and not just the "juicy bits"?? it would've explained a lot more about the story as most here may agree we don't read the erotica novels just for the sex, we also appreciate a really good story.

Have you looked into publishing an e-Book instead? you can still print them out if you have it allowed but all can obtain the book online.

and i'm not tired as I'm in Australia and it's daytime here...lol...lunchtime to be more exact.

I have to agree with Ilfain here. You should have posted an entire chapter, not just the "juicy bits". An excerpt can't just be about the sex, especially since most sites won't allow hard core excerpts to be posted (such as mine). I would have liked to know why he was in the dream machine and what went on. I also would like to know more of a story line and not just the sex. Why ARE all the women bald? Ilfain brings up some very good points!

Also Steve, please don't post the review site url again here. That is linked from your site, which is linked from here. That's good enough!

Geeze, It's Midnight here in the mountain west. So I'll be quick. First of all what exactly is the URL, My web site or my e-mail address? Sometimes I've got to get my son over here to tell me these things.
If everyone would like a whole chapter or two I can do that. I was just posting the excerpts I had put together just like the nice guy at myfavoritenudes did for me a while ago, except with out the pics as seen there. I thought without the pics would be more acceptable.
I've been thinkin about the E-book Idea too. Again I'll have to get my boy over here to show me how to do it. He just showed me today how to copy and paste. And hey it's fun! I went to a class on computers a while ago but the grant was cancelled due to the Dishonesty of the Instructor there at the ATC.
There I was, I was learnin all the chapters about this stuff left and right, then I was told that all I had done wasn't getting properly acredited to my account and to the government, that looked like I had been wasting time and goofing off. The last week of the grant, I had just found out from the crooked instructer that I was supposed to be logging my scores onto another special disc (That really counted), I tried cramming all them lessons onto the special disc as fast as I could go but it wasn't fast enough and my grant was cancelled. The crooked instructor said that I was not mentally capable of using a computer. That's was A GD LIE! (You see they, (the school and instructors), collected a big fee from the Government wheather I graduated or not).
So my chapters, my index, my glossary, my title page and my nice cover art are all over the place on this computer here. If I can get my boy to help me maybe I can get the whole thing in one spot so it can be easily downloaded to someplace that makes these e-books.
So what's a good place to get these e-books going with, in your wonderful opinion?
Gosh after doing a bunch of outdoor work today I is bushed. And that aint no BUSH LIP. So I'll retire for the evenin.
If you'll all forgive this Humble Usless Eater for his lack of knowledge about these computer things, maybe we can get off to a better start... aaa Tomorrow, Hows that?
Thank You friends, Steve Nelson

Your website and email are fine. Just don't post the web site where the review is. That is a porn site, and I don't allow links to porn sites from my site in the public areas of this forum.

As far as where to get started with the ebooks? If you want to get published, you need to visit the link I posted in an earlier response. If you want to post it online yourself, you can try a site like http://www.smashwords.com or even http://www.lulu.com

I think it's a good story line if you read it from the beginning to understand where all the events are coming from. My comment is the sex details are too much which make it more like porn. I will love to read atleast one whole chapter and see!

To new responder: Yes it is best to read the whole story. I'd like to refer you to a nice site where a new extended review has just been posted of my book but this site doesn't like other site address being posted. You can e-mail me directly and I'll give you all details on this if you like. At: stevelogicstupiddoes@yahoo.com Since OUTLOOK EXPRESS dosn't work on my computer, Regular e-mails are best. Thank You for all comments. Sincerely, Steve Nelson

Well, considering Leenecky said she doesn't like porn, I doubt she would want to visit the "nice site" where that review is posted, Steve. I'd like to remind you that this is a public area of my forum, so of course I won't allow links to sites that many would find offensive.

If anyone wants to read the review he keeps mentioning, there is no need to email him...just visit his website. He has the link to that site from there. Just so you all know, though the review itself is fine, the "review" site is covered in sexually graphic photos!

Hmm.
I'm not sure about your story.
I read the comments and know that you say there is more to it.. but it just doesnt convince me.
Females have to ride males just to get around? I dont get it. Why?

Jessiejames, Thanks for contacting me via this site. Yes there is a lot missing, sorry about that. I'd invite you to see a more complete excerpt and review of my book, so just e-mail me and I'll give you the website where you can see a nice review. The host of this site has allowed me to have some selected things about my book shown and I'm thankful that there's as much here as there is. So if you want more info just drop me an e-mail at: stevelogicstupiddoes@yahoo.com
Thanks JessieJames, Steve Nelson

Steve, I wanted to remind you that you now have access to the NC-17 forum on this site, where you can post another excerpt with erotica in it, along with that site you keep mentioning. To access that area, look at the bottom of the Story Discussion forum. Be sure to note the passwords in the description, which are needed to access.

http://www.judesplace.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=6

Click on "Gateway to NC-17 erotica".

i was a little unsure at first but i loved it
i want to read more