In a review by Crystal Adkins,
she wrote: "I loved absolutely everything
about Faith’s Portrait. The drama, the heart, raw emotion and just the
soulfulness that Ms. Liebermann puts into her characters is so
enchanting! I had to read this book in one sitting…much like the
painting I was compelled and enthralled unable to stop, Liebermann has
a definite winner here..."
The following is an excerpt from
this wonderful story. Thanks for visiting!
She took a wrong turn on her way home from therapy and found the house
by accident. Claire Todds stopped the car at the curb and stared at the
three-story building. The dilapidated house had obviously not been
taken care of, but the “For Rent” sign in the window caught her gaze.
She quickly wrote down the phone number listed on the sign and then sat
back to stare at the house. A smile broke through her normal austere
expression as she gazed at it. As Claire saw herself living there, she
finally took note of the surrounding area. The nearest house stood a
block away, which ensured utter privacy. A high fence encompassed what
looked like a huge back yard from her vantage point. She did frown as
she finally noticed all the weeds in the front yard. Claire would
definitely have to hire some of the local boys in the neighborhood to
help out. She suddenly laughed, already feeling as if the place were
hers.
Her mood lifted greatly, Claire pulled away from the house and made her
way home. She normally had nothing to be happy about on her way home
from the painful ordeal of therapy. Her hips and legs would scream in
agony for at least two days afterwards, but she knew it was important.
If her parents hadn’t made her go to the necessary sessions every week,
she might never have regained her ability to walk. She sighed as she
remembered the accident.
Claire had been crossing the street when a car made an illegal turn and
struck her. Many painful surgeries had followed to repair her crushed
hips and legs. She had only been sixteen at the time and even a decade
later, she still suffered from the accident. She couldn’t even be
overly mad at the driver of the car, who had been an old man that
claimed he hadn’t seen her. Due to his bad vision, he had only lost his
license as punishment for the accident. Though she tried not to
remember him being more concerned with his expensive BMW than whether
or not he had killed her. She couldn’t remember much about the
accident, but she could never forget him glaring down at her where she
lay on the street. At least he had full coverage, so all her medical
bills had been taken care of. She still wished someone had the sense to
take away his license before that fateful day.
She sighed as she shook her head. “No use crying over spilt milk,”
Claire muttered to herself as she pulled into the driveway of her
parents’ house. She had been able to move away from home for several
years, but it took time to work up the nerve. Since the accident, her
parents spoiled her and hadn’t wanted her to live on her own. They
always feared that she would fall and would be unable to make it to a
phone to call for help. Claire would laugh at their silliness.
“Nothing’s wrong with my arms, you know?” She would always answer.
Claire now sat with the slip of paper in her hands where she had
written the phone number. She would call first and see if she could
afford the house before telling her parents about it. With a deep sigh,
she pushed open the car door. Grabbing her cane from the passenger
side, she used it and the door to get out of the car. Pain shot through
her, and she bit her lip to keep from moaning. The front door opened
and her mother raced out.
“Honey, do you need help?”
Claire held up her free hand and shook her head. “No, Mom, I’m OK! Just landed wrong.” She finished with a forced smile.
Her mother shook her head and wrung her hands as she watched her daughter limp her way toward her. “You sure, Claire?”
Claire sighed, feeling her joints loosening up a bit. “I’m just a bit
tight right now. I’ll feel better in a few hours.” She spoke the truth
after all, since some days she didn’t need the cane’s assistance. Pain
didn’t always accompany her noticeable limp. After ten years, she had
almost gotten used to the dull throb that constantly plagued her.
“Well, I made a cake…chocolate… your favorite. Would you like me to cut you a slice?”
“Sure, Mom. That sounds great!”
While her mom went into the kitchen, Claire walked into her room. She
had been upstairs until the accident, but usually tried to avoid
stairs. Her therapist made her use the Stair Master, which she
absolutely hated.
She walked over to the phone and dialed the number on the slip of paper. A man answered. “Sam here.”
“Oh hi! I’m calling about the house on Elm? Is it still for rent?”
At first she heard nothing but the shuffling sound of paper. “Well, yes it is. Actually it was just listed this morning.”
“This morning?” Claire repeated, clearly shocked that she just happened
to run across it the very day it listed. “Well, I’m very curious what
the rent is.”
“Eight hundred a month.”
Claire gasped. “For that mansion?”
Sam chuckled on the other end.
“Well, I wouldn’t call it a mansion. Might have been back in the day,
but…well, you saw it. It hasn’t been taken care of and is a bit of a
fixer upper. I’m actually surprised the owners aren’t trying to sell it
instead of renting.”
“I’ll take it.” She said quickly.
“Well, how about that. I’ll just need you to come into the office and fill out the paperwork, then Miss…?”
“Oh, Todds…Claire Todds.” Her happiness made it very hard to
concentrate on the rest of what he said, but she wrote down the address
of his office, made an appointment and then hung up the phone. Her hand
still rested on the re-ceiver, when her mother came into her room.
“Did you make a call, dear?” She asked, the slice of cake in her hand.
Claire nodded, the smile slowly fading. Now she had to tell her parents.
All her family and friends came out for the move. They had her packed
and transported over as soon as her application went through, and she
signed the lease. She had been pleased to learn of the basement, which
made a perfect location for her dark room. Photography had always been
her passion, and she made a good living from it as well. Some of her
photos had even made it into national magazines.
Claire did as much
as she could, but for the most part just stayed in one place and
unpacked things. Her friends helped clean up the downstairs. No one did
much with either of the upstairs floors, since they felt she wouldn’t
be spending any time up there. Her parents had been shocked to see the
house their daughter had rented. They just couldn’t under-stand why
their crippled daughter would want a three-story house. She tried to
explain that her therapist had been pushing for her to use stairs more
often, as that would work out her legs and hips more. Just going down
to the basement would surely help out, though she couldn’t wait to
explore the entire house. The pain of her recent therapy session had
mostly faded, and the excitement of the move made her feel more than up
for the task.
As her parents attacked the lawn, and her best friend put things away
in her new bedroom, Claire made her way down to the basement. She
cringed the entire way and sighed as she reached the bottom. She smiled
to see that someone had already cleared away the cobwebs and left the
boxes of her photo gear on the worktable. They had even put up a
clothesline that spanned the width of the room. Claire hobbled over to
the boxes and opened the first one. As she set things on the table, her
gaze went about the room and stopped directly across from her.
“What is that?” She asked herself. Putting the bottle of solution on
the table, she walked around it and headed for the far wall. She gasped
as she recognized the dumbwaiter. She slid its door open and peered
inside the huge compartment, wondering if it even worked anymore. She
pushed the button to the right of the miniature elevator and jumped a
bit as it began moving up, slamming her palm against the button again
to bring it back down. Biting her lip as an idea formed in her mind,
she turned and sat on the edge and then slid herself in backwards.
Claire bit her lip at the throb in her hips and pulled herself in the
rest of the way. Being very curious as to how far up it went, Claire
reached over and hit the button, wrapping her arms around her knees as
the dumbwaiter began its slow journey upwards.
She counted the doors on her way and held her breath as she passed the
first door, wondering if anyone in the house could hear her. It ran
remarkably silent for not being used in many years, and Claire giggled
like a schoolgirl as she passed another door. She felt a bit surprised
when it didn’t stop at the third door, before realizing that the
dumbwaiter must go all the way to the attic. She couldn’t believe her
luck at being able to get throughout the house without having to endure
the pain of using the stairs. Claire silently clapped her hands
together in excitement, totally anxious to see what she would find in
the attic.
When her little personal elevator stopped, she slid the door open and
gazed out into the dark attic. Frowning, she leaned out a bit to look
for windows. She slid out of the dumb-waiter and limped her way over to
the far wall. Light filtered around the edges of something propped on a
few boxes. She focused on the large picture frame and moved it aside.
The sudden brightness nearly blinded Claire, who shielded her eyes with
her hand, before turning her back to the small round window.
Her gaze scanned the many boxes and articles that cluttered the large
attic. As she looked around, she figured that the attic must cover the
entire top of the house. She spotted the descending staircase on her
right but paid it no mind, knowing that she would be going down the way
she had come up. Claire looked from one item to the next: an old
rocking horse, jack in the box, dollhouse, dolls, baby carriage, and
the list went on and on. There had to be at least fifty boxes, all
varying in size.
“Maybe that’s why they’re renting and not selling. They don’t want to
clean out this place,” she said aloud with a smile. Claire looked back
at the picture frame she had moved out of the way. It now leaned
against the boxes beside her, and she reached for it. It had to be at
least three feet high and maybe two feet wide. She immediately noticed
the antique frame and absently wondered about its worth. As she
remembered that nothing in the attic belonged to her, she shook her
head at her own thought. Claire held the portrait up in front of her
and gasped.
The woman within the frame certainly looked younger than Claire and far
prettier. She had only seen the old fashioned hairdo in a few movies,
as well as the style of her dark blue dress. Claire finally looked at
the woman’s face, and her eyes widened. She looked sort of lost and a
bit sad. As she looked into the younger woman’s eyes, she had the
deepest desire to touch them. They seemed so real that it looked like a
living photograph. That’s what she thought at first, though as Claire
held the frame closer to the light, she could clearly see the brush
strokes. She reluctantly tore her gaze from those haunted eyes and
looked at the bottom of the painting for the artist’s name. She
couldn’t decipher the tiny scrawl and shook her head.
“So very beautiful,” she sighed. Not wanting to leave the portrait in a
dusty attic, Claire took it with her back to the dumbwaiter. Though she
still wanted to explore, she might be missed soon and didn’t want
anyone to worry about her. The painting fit nicely in the back of the
dumbwaiter, and Claire slid in beside it. The two of them then made
their way back down to the basement.
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