Jude’s Fiction Blurbs for 6/9/09 – 06/12/09

June 12th, 2009 by Jude Writing
  • she reminded herself as she unlocked the door. Viv could feel Leo’s breath on the back of her neck, but he didn’t touch her. Would he? #jrf #
  • “I need to get cleaned up. Didn’t expect u to take me to my own party.” A nervous giggle slipped out, and she cringed. “No problem,” he #jrf #
  • said with a grin, his expression sexy but unreadable. She nodded, backing out of the room. Leaving the door unlocked, she stripped. #jrf #
  • Viv felt a bit wicked getting naked with a man in the other room. She caught her reflection in the closet mirror and smiled at the flush #jrf #
  • in her cheeks. Her gazed traveled down her nakedness, wondering if Leo would appreciate her lightly tanned skin. She shook her head #jrf #
  • at her own foolishness, heading for the bathroom. Turning on the shower and testing the water, she stepped under the hot spray. #jrf #
  • Viv enjoyed the water coursing through her hair and down her body. She held her breath when she heard the shower door slide open but did #jrf #
  • not turn around. She held her breath & waited for him to touch her. Leo’s hands slid over her shoulders and then the sides of her neck. #jrf #
  • Viv closed her eyes with a soft moan. “U shouldn’t be in here,” she whispered. “U want me to leave?” He kissed the rose tattoo on her #jrf #
  • back, letting his tongue linger. She quivered unable to speak. Leo’s fingers slid around her to gently grasp her breasts. “Is this OK?” #jrf #
  • Viv clenched her eyes shut, curious how far he would go if she didn’t move. She knew it was wrong to let him continue, but she couldn’t #jrf #
  • stop him. She felt his touch all through her body to the tips of her toes. Leo’s hands stopped moving and she held her breath. “Viv?” #jrf #

This is the last post for this story. It will be the first erotic romance I am writing to submit to an online publisher. This excerpt just gives you a taste of the final product.


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